Monday, June 20, 2011 | By: Taffy

A Youngster's Story

"I went outside and wrote this all by myself, Mom."

"I see little plants like I'm in a tiny jungl. I see houses like honted manchins.
I see clouds like pilows in the deep Blue seas. I see the sun like a huge Firework.
I see roks like little ants.
I see cats and dog like tigers. I see spoons like miny shovles. I see tails like lots of snaks. I see cars like Big Bugs on the road. I see Birds like huge dragons in the air. I see trees like gaint peaple. I see whales like Big plans in the water. I see spiks like on a Dinsor.
I see Balls like meters Falling From the sky.
the end

(Copied straight from the little, green paper handed to me Sunday afternoon).

4 comments:

Kimi said...

I loved that! What imaginative, descriptive writing! Awesome, Zach--keep on writing.

Angie said...

That's terrific. A little writer in the making. I love kids' creativity.

Holly Ann said...

That's fabulous!

Peggy Eddleman said...

Awww! That was awesome!