tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2294986155177272443.post3807570131799062136..comments2024-02-16T02:46:08.503-08:00Comments on Write Writing Written: Critque of my first page from IT'S NOT METaffyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11796711977284429278noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2294986155177272443.post-18934062628397429042013-09-09T09:21:30.158-07:002013-09-09T09:21:30.158-07:00I like that you kept the line "in quiet cemet...I like that you kept the line "in quiet cemeteries." That line kicks me in the gut! :)Jessie Humphrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11096043821002254348noreply@blogger.com